We look at the Mona Lisa, and regardless of whether or not you enjoy or appreciate art, there is something about her face that we cannot deny, nor can we quite understand. Artists for generations have studied this face and millions of people per year visit the Louvre museum in Paris, just to catch a glimpse of that cheeky smile.
Try your best introduction for the thesis statement: DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
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Mona Lisa is alive. Look at her as a painting and you will see paint. Look at her as a person, and you will see a living human. Take a glance at Mona Lisa, she is smiling. Take a good look, the smile feels forced, she is sad. Gaze long enough, she is miserable, and you felt the need to help her. Look away, look back and there she is smirking like something good has just happened. How Davinci created her is still a mystery and that is why millions of people per year visit the Louvre to experienced Mona Lisa, and generations of artists try to understand and recreate the perfect face.
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Very nice. Could use more development of context... to explain artists' fascination with her.
DeleteMona Lisa is alive. Look at her as a painting and you will see paint. Look at her as a person, and you will see a living human. At first glance at, she is smiling. Take a good look, then the smile feels forced, she is sad. Gaze long enough, she became miserable, and you felt the need to help her. Look away, look back and there she is smirking like something good has just happened. Mona Lisa, she is the most alive portrait the world has ever seen yet how Davinci created her is still a mystery. A mystery that has inspired generations of artists to solve, and create the next perfect face.
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Yes... this is better. I love the short sentences.
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ReplyDeleteDavinci's Mona Lisa has the perfect face. A face that shows no clear emotions, and yet it is not just a boring blank face, there is more to the painting than that. One of the many contributing factors that make this painting so special are her eyes, they always stare you down regardless of where you are standing in the room. However there are other subtle features in this painting which can not be ignored, everything in the painting helps contribute to making Mona Lisa's face the "perfect" one. From the texture of the painting to the small details of the face, everything in this picture spells perfection. This painting is a source of inspiration to numerous artists who are seeking to paint a portrait of a person. That is why Davinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artist after about how to paint the perfect face.
Work to describe the perfection. Try not to tell the reader that it is perfect. Show the reader why it is perfect.
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ReplyDeleteDaVinci's Mona Lisa is mysterious. Her face can make us create many questions that are hard to answer. Some people may be curious why the woman on this portrait can follow us with her mysterious eyes as if she is alive. Furthermore, when looking at her feeling, whether she is smiling or not and why she looks happy and sad at the same time — both may possibly come up in someone’s minds. Because of these mysteries on her face, almost all artists agree that Mona Lisa has the perfect one and choose her for inspiring their works.
Ok. Could use more development of context... to introduce the fascination of artists with this face.
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ReplyDeleteDaVinci's Mona Lisa is accountable as one of the most beautiful woman in the world by all people. Mona Lisa's face especially has given us many thought and created different feeling to all of us. The feeling of mystery through her eyes that make us feel alive, as well as the smile on her face which is hard to explain whether happy or sad. Since DaVinci has gathered every little details into the painting, the texture, the mood, and the feeling, these elements combine perfectly. Therefore, DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
This is thoughtfully developed. I can see what's coming next.
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ReplyDeleteShe is both looking at you and you are looking at her. You cannot, entirely, know what is in her mind, but in contrast, she seems to know what you are thinking about. Importantly, she is not a person, but a person in the portrait instead. With her mysterious little smile, everyone in this world, of course, knows her as Mona Lisa. The reputation of this picture which is painted by a famous artist namely DaVinci comes from Mona Lisa’s face. She is not the most worldwide elegant women picture, but she has the most natural face that makes her, when people have seen her, becomes absolutely charming. Therefore, it comes up with that DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
Nice effort. I like how you're pushing the reader sentence by sentence.
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ReplyDeleteAt the Louvre, many tourists walk through many attractive pictures to seek for the most mysterious picture, Mona Lisa. 400 years ago, DaVinci, one of the most renowned artist, created a recognizable woman's face. Wherever you are, the woman in the picture is always staring at you if you look at her eyes. You cannot prevent her attraction. In addition, You are not able to interpret her expression from staring her emotion and those mysterious eyes. These evidences can demonstrate why DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists about how to paint the perfect face.
Good effort. Work to consider the order of your sentences. First you take us to the Louvre, but then you take us back 400 years ago, and then the reader is not sure where/when we are.
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ReplyDeleteWhen we discuss what is the most elegant paintings in the world, Mona Lisa must be on one of the list. The women, with the little smile and the eyes which always look at the viewers, has given artists around the world an idea to draw a beautiful face. All techniques which are required to draw the perfect face are deployed in this painting. Thus, DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
This seems incomplete. More background is required to understand the "elegance" of Mona Lisa.
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ReplyDeleteFor most people painting is difficult, but painting a face is a whole other level. As there is so many things that goes into painting a face ; like the facial expression, symmetry and proportion etc. And to get "The perfect face" is quite a challenge. Artists often look to Leonardo Davinci's famed painting "The Mona Lisa" to inspire them. The Mona Lisa has a quintessential face--the perfect symmetry, mesmerising eyes that seems to fixate on you and her cheeky smile. You are unable to take your eyes off of her.
This is a good start but it seems incomplete. It could use 2-3 more sentences to get back to the point of painting.
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ReplyDeleteCreating a beautiful painting is not easy when you do not have a motivation. To create a masterpiece one you need to put inspiration and motivation to work together. Leonado Davinci, the most well-known artist from France, had shown us how to do that though his portrait work called "Mona Liza", a perfect woman's face. With the mystery in her eyes or when her smiling, it makes this picture as though it had a live. With out a doubt Leonado has inspired all of artists around the world .
You start by introducing the idea of motivation; however, this is not what the focus of your essay would be. Reconsider the first sentence.
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ReplyDeleteA mysterious girl staring at me with an indescribable smile, a smile that hides something behind it. What is she thinking? Who is she? The Mona Lisa, one of the most famous Da Vinci’s artwork. She is considered as a perfect face with a realistic looks. No matter where you are standing it seems like she is staring at you, no matter how long you try to stare at her smile you cannot figure what is her emotion. With an amazing technique of Da Vinci, it is still a question of how to draw a perfect face and this is a big motivation to many artists around the world.
Be careful about the word "motivation" here. What is the motivation? I'm not sure if it is the right word in this context.
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ReplyDeletePainting is hard. Painting the face is harder. Every artist can be able to paint and draw the face. However, only a few artist can paint the perfect face. DaVinci is one of the artists who can paint the perfect face which is Mona Lisa. Mona Lisa is a name of a person who were painted by DaVinci. Mona Lisa is a perfect picture that has an emotion. She has mysterious eyes and her smile can make people who look at her feel differently. Some people feel that she is happy, but some feel that she is sad. Therefore, DaVinci’s Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
This is nice. I like the short sentences. It seems like it could use 1-2 more before the thesis statement to develop towards the focus on artists.
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ReplyDeleteMona Lisa, it surely that most of the people heard about this name. A picture of the most beautiful girl back then, was painted by Davinci, the famous artist. The picture of the perfect face has inspired many painters for reasons, the realistic of the painting , the emotion of it and the mysterious of her smile. These elements inspired the painters in order to create another memorable artwork.
More background is required here. Help the reader see this face.
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ReplyDeleteWhy Mona Lisa is one of the most recognizable painting in the world? Leonado da Vinci had painted Mona Lisa for more than 400 years ago, but people still talking about this painting until now. The painting of Mona Lisa give you many feeling when you look at it closely. Moreover, this painting is look so real. DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
This requires more development. ("many feelings" such as...)
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ReplyDeleteLook at her eyes and what feeling do you perceive. One museum in Paris presents it on the wall with safe frame and barriers in order to prevent damage from flashing and tourists. This picture seems to be an important art due to the one who was created it is Leonardo Davin Ci, the greatest artist and inventor. This painting is most famous and reputation came from perfect expression of emotion doubtlessly. Many artists are curious as Mona risa, the one who is in the painting, might want to imply something through her smile and her eyes. The mystery has not been discovered yet. All of them were inspired by this picture and the next perfect face painting could be somewhere and waiting to be explored.
Look sentence by sentence. It doesn't develop well because you're trying to introduce too many general facts that may not matter to the topic. But I like how you are trying slowly bring Mona Lisa into this. Good effort.
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ReplyDeleteA famous picture "Mona Lisa" painted by a famous artist known by people around the world, Leonardo DavinCi. A face with mysterious emotion, as you stare at her you would feel that you are being gaze. With it unique character it catches many people's attention, and also interest many artist about the the secret behind the mystifying face expression. Because of her enigmatic face the picture was considered the "Perfect Face", a face that will make people eager to know about.
Keep developing. When you say "enigmatic", describe this a little further.
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ReplyDeletePortrait painting is the most ubiquitous artwork that we have seen in all kinds of art. It is a hard work to make a good painting. So, as they need to focus on every details on painting a person, especially a face. The Mona Lisa is a model of a valuable art work. Therefore, Davici's Mona Lisa has inspired all about how to paint the perfect face.
This is incomplete. Very little development at all.
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ReplyDeleteEverything's have their own background and mystery. The famous masterpiece that has been distinguished by people around the world is Mona Lisa. The dimension of her face is a perfect shape, her emotion is so complicated to express and her eyes are so myterysious. The potrait is vey realistic, elegant, and incalculable. DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
Ok, but when you say perfect shape: describe it. When you say "her emotion" , describe it... etc. More development needed.
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ReplyDeletePeople seems to get attracted and can not set their eyes off the painting. Mona Lisa is one of the world famous paintings that captured attention of people and inspire many artist about painting of the perfect face. The Mona Lisa was painted by Leonardo Da Vinci about a century ago. It is also being described as the most perfect face ever painted. Therefore, the perfection of her faces gave the inspirations and ideas on how to paint the perfect faces.
It seems like a little more development is needed after the 1st sentence. Describe that painting we can't keep our eyes off of.
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ReplyDeletePortrait painting is a mystery. Arists need to make work complex mystrious and real, coming from inspiration and very good techniques. The Mora Lisa is one of the most perfect portrait painting because of her perfect face. Her eyes look real and are shaped perfectly that audience around can see. Therefore, The perfection of her faces is an important inspiration of all artists who want to paint the perfect face.
More description of the painting is necessary to make this work.
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ReplyDeleteSometime people can recognize other people's emotion by looking at their face. Davinci's Mona Lisa, the most famous picture in the world, has a mysterious face because people cannot know what is her emotion when they see her face. Therefore, million of people come to visit Mona Lisa every year. What is more, Mona Lisa is the original of perfect face because of her mysterious smile and eyes and it is the inspiration for painting the perfect face.
This needs a little more development to get to the point of artists and painting. The final sentence doesn't seem to quite fit here.
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ReplyDeleteThere is one painting that attracts the interest of people around the world. This painting is called Mona Lisa, whose painter is Davinci. The main reason that people considered this painting as one of the most popular picture in the world is Mona Lisa face. Her eyes are mystery, because it always look to the people who is looking at her. Her smile has some riddles in side it, as nobody know that weather Mona Lisa is happy or sad.
This is a nice start, but it need 2-3 more sentences to explain the context and focus towards the thesis statement.
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ReplyDeleteMost artists would like to perform perfect paintings. To invent good artworks, they need inspirations. Mona Lisa inspires many artists because of her eyes, nose and lip. Davinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about hot to paint the perfect face.
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ReplyDeleteOne of the most seen picture of all time. Capture millions of visitor to Paris each year. The best Art work of Da Vinci call Mona Lisa not only imitate how to paint the perfect face but also inspired numerous artists. Mona Lisa unique smile and also the eyes that look at you no matter where you stand and watch the paint from.
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ReplyDeleteThere are many painter who can paint the face, but is it perfect? Mona Lisa is the perfect example of a perfect face. This picture is a masterpiece of Davinci one of the greatest artist in history, and this picture is the most recognized painting in the world over the time. She has a fascinated smile and eyes that she always stare at you making many people come in to see her everyday. The Mona Lisa's mysterious smile has inspired many writers, singers, and especially painters how to paint the perfect face.
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ReplyDeleteIn Paris, if you go to the "ROOF", you will enter one of the most fancy art gallery in the world. Some mystery pressure is bringing you to the end of the hall way. You will face the most beautiful painting in the world., which is staring into your eyes, no matter where you are at, it is still giving you an eye-contact. And that amazing painting is named "Mona Lisa."
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ReplyDeleteCelebrities are not forgotten once they are dead. Painting pictures are not right and wrong or good or bad. Davinci is the world best artist that also paint the world famous picture that most people know. This picture name Mona Lisa. This picture has paint perfect face, but not every person can paint perfect face. Moreover, eye's Mona Lisa is very realistic that can show emotion to other people.
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ReplyDeleteWhen people heard of the name Davinci, the first thing that always comes to their mind is the well-known Monta Lisa painting. It is one of the most perfect art figure of human in the history. People are often wonder how Davinci drawn such a perfect realistic figure. When we have passion and the love for something, we often make that certain thing as good as we can.
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ReplyDeleteHer beautiful eyes that's looking at you, her mouth that's giving you a little tricky smile. No one could ever tell what's the emotion under that perfect face, Mona Lisa. Mona Lisa is famous work of an artist name Leonardo da Vinci. Many artists have painted the portrait of a woman but what make Da Vinci's work so unique is a perfect face of Mona Lisa. She can make people feel like her eyes looking at you all the time, you feel like she's listening to you and she knows what you are thinking. Her charming mysterious face therefore inspired many artists about how to paint the perfect face.
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ReplyDeleteWhenever we talk about perfect face, Mona Lisa might be the first picture that comes into people mind. Devinci’s Mona Lisa is a realistic woman paint that shows us about an emotion and characteristic. Her eyes look very sad, while her lip is sneering. This picture is quite mysterious because it can show us a lot of emotion such as sad, happy, and kindness
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ReplyDeleteThe word perfect can mean different. It might mean beautiful for someone. However, in art "perfect" means proportion that is balanced in the picture. DaVinci's Mona Lisa is the best one of the exam of perfect face. This is because the Mona Lisa's face proportion is balance. In addition, this picture looks realistic and mysterious. Her eyes and mouth are implying the meaning. Her eyes will look every person even though they stand in the corner. Moreover, her mouth seems to smile, but her eyes do not tell her happy. Therefore, most of the people and artists appoint to be the best picture that has a perfect face. Although it might not be perfect for someone, it might perfect for others. It depends on individual attitude. However, DaVinci's Mona Lisa has inspired all artists after about how to paint the perfect face.
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ReplyDeleteWhile we are near Mona Lisa, we feel her staring at us. Undoubtedly, she is the painting in the world because it is mesmerize us. Mysterious face of her is unexpected as sometimes she look like smiling or saying. These expressing of her lead us to stop whenever we pass this painting. Davinci had made the most curious painting in the world and inspired artists how to paint the perfect face.
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