So... we have worked on an Introduction: background, context, thesis statement. Your essay should have a specific and clear point that it wants to talk about and explore.What happens next? This is the same question I asked on Day 1. One paragraph / one idea... what are the ideas for the following paragraphs (the Body) that you will use to support clearly and directly your thesis statement? Brainstorm and select the three best ideas you can think of, and then be ready to provide supporting details for those ideas.
In this blog entry, state your thesis for your essay, and then describe what happens next.
Make sure you include your ID # in your post. Aj. M
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ReplyDeleteThesis: India, Russia and China are the largest habitats to our surviving tigers, and their governments have agreed to work with organizations, such as the WWF and the United Nations, to preserve and regenerate the striped cat’s population.
My essay will consist of strategies that the WWF and the United Nations provide to these three countries. It will also consist of how well the countries do, the pros and cons of saving the endangered species. I was thinking to look at problems such as losing culture (in China) as the tigers cannot be hunted, and problems of unemployment (as people lose jobs and cannot find anything to do as they're uneducated).
I will focus on the three countries, but there will probably be more than one paragraph for each country. I'm still unsure of how to classify what I want to talk about, however, the pros and cons for environment, economy, and social will be mentioned. I will then source how people evaluate the countries on how well these countries are doing.
And my conclusion will consist of my prediction for the tiger population after researching and writing about the steps that the countries mentioned are taking.
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ReplyDeleteThesis : Abraham Lincoln is a remarkable person who represents endeavor, peace and freedom
Suport Paragraphs : My support paragraphs are going to be about his actions during his serving time, which are about how well he dealt with the American Civil War that occurred after he manifested the Emancipation Proclamation, and also the Emancipation Proclamation as well. Moreover, I am going to talk about how hard he put efforts as well as his failures before he became United States president.
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ReplyDeleteThesis : The three most important keys that could lead those people to be effective in leader role are teamwork, vision and empathy
My essay will focus on three factors that is able to help inexperienced leader. Many new leaders are failed to guide their members.Three paragraph will describe those factors deeply and tell the readers that many people can be successful in this role. Besides that this essay will explain some situation that might make amateur leaders distressed.
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ReplyDeleteThesis: Gandhi is a great leader who represents peace and freedom of the people
support paragraphs: paragraph are going to be about how Gandhi's action freed his people from the British colonies. Its going to talk about how well Gandhi uses his non-violent protest method to deal with the Brits. I'm going to talk about the factors of success leader, Gandhi, and also his failure.
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ReplyDeleteThesis: Che Guevara is the most valuable revolutionist and the symbolic of bravery and freedom from many things he has done.
Most of my entire essay will mention on Che's bravery when he fought for freedom even it brought him the death. How he bravely did stand and fight with the powerful country like U.S.A. How he turned himself from a doctor to revolutionist. How his successful from freeing Cuba activated Latin Americans, and how his bravely death inspires most people these day to fight with injustice.
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ReplyDeleteThesis: Charlie Chaplin has his unique way to tell the history via his movie. Other directors would choose the depressed emotion but he made it differently.
I would focus on his movie 'Modern Time' and how Charlie conveyed the history via his movie. I will distribute the problems in the US. into 2 parts; economic and social.
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ReplyDeleteThesis: Siddhartha Gautama discovered the four sights of life and became Buddha.
Support paragraphs: In my supporting paragraphs, i would mention about the four sights of life, and explain each of them. How they affect the life of Siddhartha, and lead him to the decision of becoming Buddha.
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ReplyDeleteThesis: Being an action film director requires several specific skills.
I would focus on three(or four) skills which are ability to understand the external environment, responsibility, and think strategically. I will give examples of directors each paragraph. How do they have an ability to be successful action film directors will be mentioned in this essay. At the moment, I am trying to find useful sources and information.
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ReplyDeleteThesis – There are three possible strategies that could solve the conflict in the work place.
Body1: Allowing employees to have one idea to each project.
• They would design their best idea; therefore they do not have many things to argue to each other.
• More contribution within workforce to create teamwork
Body2: If there are too many troubles in the conflict, make a rule to fire them
• This would make the conflict deduce because they would get afraid.
• Eliminate arguments while working hours to save time to create more works.
Body3: Punish the trouble makers by suspension, and reduce the payment they receive.
• They could make the employees do not want to have conflict
• If they have conflict, this might affect their future because they would not get enough money to spend.
This journal blog is now closed. Thank you for your participation. Aj. M
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