By now, you would have an Introduction. This Introduction bring the reader into your world. It does this by presenting a kind of an anecdote about the point of your essay. It may do this by citing statistics, quotations, and research that show a surprising fact or trend or problem. Which ever way you do this, make sure your reader is hooked; the writing should make the reader wonder... be curious... and ask him or herself: So... WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?What happens next? What are the ideas you will use to organize your Body Paragraphs? Don't just think of ideas. Think of GOOD ideas. Think of SURPRISING ideas. Think of ideas that we wouldn't normally think about. In the Introduction, you have to hook the reader's attention. In the Body, you have to keep the reader's attention.
For this final journal blog, please write your thesis statement and tell me what 3 or 4 body ideas you plan to use to support the thesis statement. Remember to include your ID# in your post. Aj. M
I'm going to do write about health, and my thesis statement is people woh concume this kind of chickens can get sick, a serious diseases, or even die. Now, I feel confuse with my thesis because I want to write another thing but I don't know why it turns to this one. At first, I want to write about process of factory farm makes people get sick. Now, my thesis is kind of illnesses that make people sick from factory farm. I'm so confuse with these two ideas; so, I don't know how to continue my body paragraphs.
ReplyDelete#5680171
My thesis is Jim Thompson became famous for his brand, and his brand is well-known around the world. In my essay is combined 3 supports such as Thompson's biography, his investment in Thailand and his achievement.
ReplyDelete5680155
My thesis statement : The RT-PCR has a superior ability to diagnose cancer compared to any other method. For the first body, I will be giving out example of methods in diagnosis of cancer which are not effective. the second would be on the development of PCR technology to RT-PCR. and Lastly, the effectiveness of RT-PCR of detecting cancer
ReplyDelete5680020
My thesis statement is this essay will report how Top’s (The CEO of Tao Kae Noi) unyielding spirit, which includes: believed, persevered and was fearless in his ambition to be one of Thailand’s most successful business people. And of course, the first supporting idea is how he believed in himself, the next supporting idea is perseverance and lastly his fearless.
ReplyDelete5680174
My thesis statement is about how McDonald's uses cultural marketing to get more local customers. The first body paragraph is going to be about different food in different countries of McDonald's. Followed by the different of commercial in China and lastly it is going to be about how cultural marketing targets on teenagers and children in this generation.
ReplyDelete5680140
My thesis statement : Thailand is an agricultural country, so improving agriculture means enhancing the quality of people' lives. In body paragraphs, I will write about royal agricultural projects. The first body is about The Royal Project that creates job opportunities. Second is The Royal Chitralada Project. The last body is about Royal Rainmaking.
ReplyDelete#5680153
DeleteMy thesis is:There are several benefits of robots that make people use them to work in the automobile industry. In my body paragraph, I still rearrange the benefits of the robot. I may mention the benefits of it on each paragraph and also some good evidence or example to show each point clearly.However, my body paragraph idea cannot reliable because it will depend on sources that I will find.
ReplyDelete5680142
My thesis statement is about the strategic roles of financial management on genetic modified food. I am going to write about the capital budgeting and risk management. My first body is capital bugeting, second body is the example of the capital budgeting on a distributor of genectic modified food, third body is the risk management and lastly the example of risk management on genetic modified food.
ReplyDelete5680170
My thesis is Not only is social media like Facebook a problem, but there are also a lot of advanced technologies these days that enable other people, like government who we do not expect them to know our personal details like the government to know our private lives and details. In my body paragraph I'm going to talk about different types of technologies that are being use for spy people by governments. Also, add some details, method, and example about these technologies.
ReplyDelete5680169
My thesis is about Hitler leadership and his failure. My fist body is going to present about Hitler had highly abilities of leadership. My second body is about why Hitler lost the war and why these happened. Last body, I am going to show how Hitler could change technology in that era. In this last body, I will present in counter argument.
ReplyDelete#5680125
ID:5680152
ReplyDeleteMy thesis statement is about is it potential for humans to settle down and live in exo planet like Giliese 504b (GJ 504b). My first paragraph is about temperature of this planet. Is it possible for humans to live? In the following paragraphs are about atmosphere and environment of this planet. In my opinion is now it is impossible that humans could live in this planet. In the conclusion paragraph is the prediction of technology in future. It could possibly for humans to settle down in it in the future.
my thesis statement is Most people always think having meal at home just only strengthens their family bond, but eating self-cooked food also strengthens their health. body#1 is about unhealthy recipe in common restaurant, so eating own cooking will be better. Body#2 is about non beneficial ingredient that most restaurant use to enhance flavor. Body#3 is about homemade food provide great amount of nutrition that we need per day.
ReplyDelete5680121
My thessis is about most terrorist in southern part of Thailand have grown up in the wrong environment. Some of them had been taught in an incorrect way. My first body is about the history of southern part of Thailand, the beginning of the conflict. Second body is about misbelief that muslim cannot live with other religion. Third body is also about misbelief and wrong cultivation that muslim can kill people who are not in muslim religion.
ReplyDelete5680118
my thesis is about technology nowadays can cure office-syndrome diseases; for example, back pain, impaired eyesight and brain system collapsed. My first body will be about back pain and how to cure it. My second body will be about the bad eye sight and how to cure it. The last paragraph will be about how brain system collapsed and how to prevent that from happening.
ReplyDelete5680014.
My thesis statement is about military tactics that Vo Nguyen Giap used in TET Offensive to gain the victory over the US during the Vietnam War.
ReplyDeleteBody #1 - underground tunnels
Body#2 - make deceptive compromise
Body #3- diversionary
Supporting details in each body will include the description of each tactic, relate example/event, and its aftermath
5680107
My topic has been about Korean's table manner in formal occasion. The thesis statement I will be using is about Korean's eating customs in formal occasion. The supporting ideas will be going in the order from greeting, talking, eating, drinking. Each of these supporting topics will be illustrated in details using imagery to gives the reader a beautiful image. The conclusion will be summarizing and reflect on the topic.
ReplyDeleteID: 5680058
This journal blog is now closed. Thank you for your participation. Aj. M
ReplyDelete