In class, we reviewed introductions about Aung San Suu Kyi, Dave Brubeck, and Barack Obama. Starting an essay is often the hardest thing to do. It is also the most crucial. From your first sentence, you are already taking your reader down a path, so from that moment on, there needs to be a clear direction and a logic to that journey. Every sentences is like a step along the way. If a sentence doesn't fit, it is like your reader stepping into a hole, and from there, it is difficult to get back out.We are working to discuss Aung San Suu Kyi as a woman leader who is able to soften conflict and bring people together. On the blog, write your best attempt at an introduction: catch the reader's attention, provide the background and context, and lead us to the thesis statement.
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Many people are living their lives with hope and meditation. Even one of the most inspired leader like Aung San Suu kyi, fight through many problems with hope and meditation. Aung San Suu kyi fight through many tough situations in her life time. She got house arrest for 15 years and she is meditating everyday to come out of tough situation. The day that she received her freedom, many people were waiting and celebrating for her victory because when she come out, she will fight for her citizens and make Burma a peaceful country. In the past, Burma was a country of communist; but, Aung San Suu khi wanted to change Burma into democracy country because she wants everyone to work together to enhance the country into a better way. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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Leaders do not have to be men to bring people together. Women are also able to be leaders. Amay Suu, Aung San Suu Kyi who is Burma’s revolutionary leader was arrested more than fifteen years in her house because she protest Myanmar’s military. She fights for Burma’s freedom. After she received her freedom back more than 10,000 people are waiting for her freedom because they want to help her protest to inequality in Myanmar. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together. ID : 5880204
ReplyDeleteThere is a woman who be able to positively motivate the numerable Burmese in order to fight for their peaceful; she well known as Aung San Suu Kyi or Amay Suu. She got house arrest for about two decades while that time she had to encounter many terrible situations by meditating every day. When the day she be free, there are a large number of people come to welcome her and cheer her up because they know that she can assist them. She has become one of the indispensable position in the democratic section in Burma, so she can enhance her country and bring freedom to every citizen. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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When people discuss leaders, the first thing comes to mind is a picture of a man. A slim woman with a long dark hair attached with white roses would not be easily considered as a leader appearance, but it is her who had been imprisoned for almost two decades, it is her who fought for the democracy, and it is her who bleed herself for her people. She is Aung San Suu Kyi, one of the Nobel peace prize winner and one of the most iconic women leaders throughout history of women leadership. Who would have thought that a small woman like her would have a heart of stone and a huge courageous than many men leader. She is the one who brought peace to her nation and people and led her country to the better place.
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"Freedom must be demanded, by those who have been denied it and those who are already free" is the quote by Aung San Suu Kyii— an opposite leader in her home country of Myanmar. She came out to protest the brutal rules of dictator U Ne Win in her country, and she wrote an open letter to the government in order to ask for human rights for all people in Myanmar as there are a lot of civilians who were killed and treated violently in the country. Recently, Aung San Suu Kyi has become a major voice of human rights and freedom in Myanmar. However, Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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Peace is what unit society together and it is leader duty to end conflict with a peaceful result. Aung San Suu Kyi the greatest female Burmese leader, she earn a Nobel peace prize which clearly define her as savior; however, some people called her as Burma’s revolutionary leader because her party able to won most of the seat parliament and many citizen admire her capability of pushing democracy in to Burma. Aung San Suu Kyi always remain herself calm inside and outside, her words full of integrity and moral which brings hope into Burmese society. Nevertheless, her word also brings herself under house arrest because she was opposed with the action of current government and trying to bring up democracy. Although Aung San Suu Kyi did not spend several years under arrest doing nothing; in fact, her study enormously about philosophy and practicing meditation to be calm-hearted so that when she was released she can use those skills to help others. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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Most people believe that men should be a leader, but actually women have more abilities to do than men when they concentrated. It’s been a long time that men have more power more than women, and women cannot do other things like men. One day has a woman that has a strong believe and power to fight for freedom, equality and peaceful for Burmese. She faced many social problems and scold from others. The time is through, she be free, many people accept her and encourage her. She became one of the indispensable in Burma, then she can assist and improve the country as well. She is Aung San Suu Kyi that everyone well - known. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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As we know that the person who have the good motivation, inspiration can direct the world into positive way. Amay Suu or Aung San Suu kyi is the person that can make the people unite together with her philosophy. She did many good things and some citizens can gain benefits from her actions. She also received many awards from international institutions. She was limited her freedom by Burma governments for decades. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together. ID# 5880137
ReplyDeleteMentioning of the greatest women leader in Burmese, people obviously realize that it is “Aung San Suu Kyi”. She is a Burmese opposition politician and president of the National League for Democracy (NLD) in Burma . She is also the only person who fight for country’s right and standpoint for a decades which led her life became difficult and risk. Because of her demanding for right, she even had arrested at home for 21 years before election. But all of that tough situations, she entirely has been through with all the efforts that she has and finally inspired many people in the country to struggle for not giving up from an unfairness. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that soften a conflict and bring people together.
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Many people usually think of men when they have to choose their leaders, ending a conflict and having a peaceful life. In the past, men have more right to be a leader than women, but as time changes, men and women have right equally. No one imagine that women can be a good leader too. For example, Aung San Suu Kyi, a leader of Myanmar, fought for every person in Myanmar for equality, freedom and peaceful. Her heart is very strong because she faced with many problems and fought until got accept, as a result. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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“Amay Suu” a crowd of 10,000 people on the street roared very loudly. One woman appeared in front of them on a sunny evening. The name of this woman is well known for every single one in Burma, Aung San Suu Kyi is her name. She is a small woman, but she has a huge impact on sensibility of people. She could lead people in her country to have better life, which is very hard thing for a small woman. Furthermore, she was remembered as a reputed woman leader, and she also got Nobel peace prize in 2534. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how woman leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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One of the person inspiring a large number of people is Aung San Suu Kyi, a revolutionary leader of Burma. She merges people to love and help each other and ends up the conflict. Moreover, she does a lot of good things for many people, such as bringing equality, unity, peace, and making people to have better life. Being a good person, she won many awards, Nobel peace prize in 2534 in particular. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how woman leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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ReplyDeleteDepressed, devastated, and hopeless are described Myanmar citizens during controlling by the nefarious military group for more than a decade. However, Myanmar finally has a beacon of hope called Aung San Suu Kyi who been arrest more than 15 years. After fight for Burma's democracy, her lionhearted actions finally pay off as she won Noble peace prize which a munificent awards for a brave hero that fight for a peace. Now, she finally become an opposition leader in her home country of Myanmar. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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Most leaders in the world are men, so people might think that it is better to choose men to be leaders. However, sometimes women can work more carefully than men. Aung San Suu Kyi is a person who makes Burmese have more peaceful and better lives. Even though she is a small woman, many people respect and admire her. She wants to use democracy in Burma because it provides more equality and changes Burmese in better way. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how woman leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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"Amay Suu, Amay Suu, Amay Suu", yelling the crowded people who were acting
ReplyDeletelike they were all winning lots of million dollars lottery. Amay Suu is actually the nickname name of the most famous person in the world, it's Aung San Suu Kyi. Aung San Suu Kyi is the Burma's leader that lead Burma into a democratic country by unite the Burmese to fight for their right. She spent more than 18 years in prison and finally released over a decade ago. She has won her citizens' heart and respectfully got a noble prize award by the nation. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how woman leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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Being a leader is a big responsibility. The difficulty is double when the leader is a women. The leaders are responsible for everything that happens in the country. There is no excuse to say that they didn't know what is going on. All the results stand with them. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, strong, and powerful clearly define Aung San Suu Kyi; the women leader who is the only hope of democracy in Myanmar. Before Myanmar held the democracy, the women of Myanmar, Aung San Suu Kyi, while she were impounded, ten thousand of people roar loudly " Amay Suu Mother Suu" The lady lastly pushed through all of opposition and bring peaceful democracy to Myanmar. ID:5880230
ReplyDeleteCall her the North Star of Myanmar, the bright star shines deep in heart of Burmese for giving a direction and hope. Call her the Gandhi of Myanmar, the heroine who stands and fights for the right is no-one else, but Aung San Suu Kyi. By the help from her, the situations in Myanmar continuing become better day by day like the night sky slowly turns from black to blue. Crowed people waiting for her, it is a long time for Suu Kyi to step out from home and start her first stepping stone again with a heart of gold to fulfill their dream: no more discrimination, misleading and fear. Aung San Suu Kyi is just one example of how women leaders have a unique sensibility that can soften a conflict and bring people together.
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